Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Entangled (Spellbound #1) by Nikki Jefford

Entangled (Spellbound #1) by Nikki Jefford
Publisher: ebook, self-published
Publish Date: February 20, 2012
Pages: 303

Seventeen Graylee and her twin sisters are witches.  Graylee is also now dead.  It gets worse - she has to be stuck in her twin's body every other day.

Charlene (her twin) leaves her notes on how to dress, eat, act with her friends and how to act with her boyfriend, Blake.

Graylee (Gray) - a bit of a free-spirit, but that is ruined by her petty behavior and how she classifies everyone based on their physical traits.  Portrayed as a goody-goody, but is often rude and self-righteous.

Charlene - pretty, popular, boy crazy

Raj - intimidating, a bit of a stalker, the only non-white character - I feel like he got a crappy deal.

The writing is choppy, inconsistent and sometimes repetitive.  The idea is awesome, but the book needs some major editing work.

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